I've been writing like crazy and working on the Let's Write a Novel...Together! blog so this place has been a bit neglected. Sigh.
But...I'm officially over halfway done with my novel. I figure to have the rough draft finished by the end of this month and it to come in at about 65k. I'll have to revise and add the meat to get up to the 80k I was told to aim for. But that won't be a problem. My first draft is very, very, very bare bones.
I do want to encourage you to stop by the Let's Write a Novel...Together! blog and join us as we get ready to start planning our NaNo novel. I'm planning a sequel to the WIP.
So...what you writing? What you reading?
Showing posts with label Jean Lauzier. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jean Lauzier. Show all posts
Sunday, September 13, 2009
Wednesday, September 2, 2009
Passion
I'm cross-posting this from the Let's Write a Novel...Together! blog. Hope you enjoy. And, if you've ever considered writing a novel, click over and join us.
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I'm so mad right now I could bite nails in half. And while I won't go into the cause, it gave me the topic for this post.
We must have passion in our writing…and for our writing. Our characters must be passionate. Without passion in our writing, it's meaningless.
I'm not talking about passion of a romantic nature though sometimes that can be good too but more of the kind of passion that moves a story, that connects the reader with the story and causes them to remember it long after the last page is turned.
I'm not sure exactly how to get that passion in the story though. Maybe be finding something the characters are passionate about and channeling (so to speak) our passion into them as we write? Or do we somehow fuse our passion to that of our character?
A while back, I'd lost the passion for the writing process and for writing in general. I'd begun to think of writing as work for the most part. It was something I had to do instead of something I wanted to do. And honestly, I wasn't having any fun.
I took some time off from writing, did some serious pondering and found my joy again. I'm having fun, the writing process is exciting again and I look forward to each day's writing time. In fact, it's gotten to the point I get cranky when I have to miss a day. Thankfully for the family, that doesn't happen often.J
I think the thing I want y'all to take away from this post is what is your passion and how can you use it in your writing? Why are you writing in the first place? Heaven knows it's darn hard work, the pay is practically nil unless you manage to grab the brass ring and even if you do "make it" there will always be someone out there to put you down. You must find satisfaction in your writing, not for someone else, but for yourself. In fact, if you are writing for someone else, I sorta think you are doing it for the wrong reason.
Now that's not to say you don't have to keep your potential reader in mind as you write and revise, you must. But it's also important to take your own happiness in mind.
So…how do you impart passion into your story? And how do you keep that passion for writing and the process involved? How do you keep the passion you have for the idea throughout the writing process that may take months and months?
Share your thoughts in the comments for all of us. I'd love to hear from you.J
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I'm so mad right now I could bite nails in half. And while I won't go into the cause, it gave me the topic for this post.
We must have passion in our writing…and for our writing. Our characters must be passionate. Without passion in our writing, it's meaningless.
I'm not talking about passion of a romantic nature though sometimes that can be good too but more of the kind of passion that moves a story, that connects the reader with the story and causes them to remember it long after the last page is turned.
I'm not sure exactly how to get that passion in the story though. Maybe be finding something the characters are passionate about and channeling (so to speak) our passion into them as we write? Or do we somehow fuse our passion to that of our character?
A while back, I'd lost the passion for the writing process and for writing in general. I'd begun to think of writing as work for the most part. It was something I had to do instead of something I wanted to do. And honestly, I wasn't having any fun.
I took some time off from writing, did some serious pondering and found my joy again. I'm having fun, the writing process is exciting again and I look forward to each day's writing time. In fact, it's gotten to the point I get cranky when I have to miss a day. Thankfully for the family, that doesn't happen often.J
I think the thing I want y'all to take away from this post is what is your passion and how can you use it in your writing? Why are you writing in the first place? Heaven knows it's darn hard work, the pay is practically nil unless you manage to grab the brass ring and even if you do "make it" there will always be someone out there to put you down. You must find satisfaction in your writing, not for someone else, but for yourself. In fact, if you are writing for someone else, I sorta think you are doing it for the wrong reason.
Now that's not to say you don't have to keep your potential reader in mind as you write and revise, you must. But it's also important to take your own happiness in mind.
So…how do you impart passion into your story? And how do you keep that passion for writing and the process involved? How do you keep the passion you have for the idea throughout the writing process that may take months and months?
Share your thoughts in the comments for all of us. I'd love to hear from you.J
Tuesday, September 1, 2009
Been gone too long...
But I'm back now. I didn't plan this blog neglect but sorta got wrapped up in this novel.
As you can see...I'm just over 29k and should reach 30k by this afternoon. That's if the writing muse cooperates.
I've also started another blog project for NaNoWriMo called "Let's Write a Novel...Together" and encourage everyone to stop by and check it out.
This month, we'll be talking about different aspects of writing. Next month, we'll plan our NaNo projects, have some brainstorming chats maybe and then together in November, we'll write those novels. It'll be fun so don't miss out.
My internet diet is still working. Making writing a priority has been a very good thing.
Remember, if you don't get it written, you don't have anything to revise!!!
As you can see...I'm just over 29k and should reach 30k by this afternoon. That's if the writing muse cooperates.
I've also started another blog project for NaNoWriMo called "Let's Write a Novel...Together" and encourage everyone to stop by and check it out.
This month, we'll be talking about different aspects of writing. Next month, we'll plan our NaNo projects, have some brainstorming chats maybe and then together in November, we'll write those novels. It'll be fun so don't miss out.
My internet diet is still working. Making writing a priority has been a very good thing.
Remember, if you don't get it written, you don't have anything to revise!!!
Sunday, August 9, 2009
Midnight Snack
Since I'm not aware of a market for dialogue only pieces and this was only done for fun anyway, I've decided to share my dialogue contest entry with y'all.
Hope you enjoy.
“Finally, it‘s about time you got here. What’d you tell Bill?”
“Just that you and Dave had a fight, that you were upset and needed someone to talk to. I told him not to wait up for me, that I might stay over. Of course, he was practically asleep on the couch before I left so that’s where he’ll probably be in the morning. He’s such a bore lately. Where’d Dave go?”
“He didn’t go anywhere. Come on. I’ll show you. “
“Oh god! Is he dead?”
“Yeah, he’s dead. But I warned him. I told him what would happen if he ever cheated on me. He asked for it. You know, he didn’t even lie about it. Said she made him feel like a real man. Well, she won’t be making him feel anything ever again, I can tell you that.”
“Did he tell you who she is? I mean, do you know who he was seeing?”
“I didn’t even ask. Right now though, we got to get rid of him. I saw a couple gators when I jogged over Possum Creek yesterday. We can dump him there. It’ll be days before they find him, if they ever do. Wrap the shower curtain around him. I’ve got the truck backed up to the deck. We can just slide him right in.”
“What are you going to tell everyone? Sooner or later someone will come looking for him.”
“Yeah, all his buddies down at Joe’s. I’ll just say we had a fight, he left and didn‘t come home. It’s almost the truth. The Johnson‘s will confirm the fight and that he left.”
“But he did come home. What about that?”
“They were asleep by then. A 747 could land in their yard and not wake them. Besides, he parked in the back when he came home. Thanks to the privacy fence Dave insisted on building, they can’t see back there. Now, let’s take out the trash.”
“God, he’s heavy. How are we going ever going to get him over the bridge?”
“I’ve got a plan. Don’t worry. Follow me in your car.”
“Alright, I’ll meet you there.”
“Don’t wimp out on me. I need you. You don’t want me going to jail do you?”
“Of course not. You’re my best friend. I won’t let you down.”
*
“Hold onto the shower curtain. I’ll ease the truck away and he’ll slide right out. Ready?”
“Go real slow. Oh god, oh god, oh god. He’s out.”
“Now to get him over the bridge. Here gator, gator. Time for a midnight snack. Grab his feet, pull him up and over the rail. Leave the shower curtain, I’ll get rid of that later. There’s a construction site not far from here. They won’t notice it in the dumpster. Good, now help me shove him over.”
“I’m going to have nightmares for weeks.”
“No, you won’t. I mean, you only helped a friend. It’s not like it’s your fault. Oh wait, it is partly your fault.”
“What do you mean?”
“Did you really think you’d get away with it? That I wouldn’t figure it out? You’ve been wearing that same cheap perfume since sixth grade. When Dave came home from his business trip last month, his clothes reeked of it.”
“Come on, I’m not the only person who wears Temptation.”
“True, but you were gone the same weekend. I called. Thought a girl’s night out would be fun. Bill told me about your business trip.”
“I was in meetings all weekend. Honest. It really was a business trip.”
“Maybe. I couldn’t prove it one way or the other so I started following Dave. The Blue Moon hotel on Tuesday and Thursdays at lunch. Then there was the day y’all didn’t even make it to the hotel. Last Wednesday wasn’t it? I always hated doing it in the front seat but you seemed to be enjoying it.”
“I didn’t mean to… I couldn’t help it. And he said it was over, that he was filing for divorce.”
“It doesn’t matter. You were my best friend. There’s no excuse. No matter what he said.”
“What are you going to tell Bill? He knows I went to your place. He’ll expect me back in the morning.”
“You never made it to my place. Just cause you said I called, doesn’t mean I did. Besides, once he finds out about you and Dave, he’ll be more angry than concerned.”
“Please… You don’t have to do this.”
“Yeah I do. You were a good friend but it‘s too late. Now, you’re dessert for the gators. Bye Pam.”
“I’m sor…”
“Look out below. Open up boys, this one will make you feel like a real gator.”
Hope you enjoy.
“Finally, it‘s about time you got here. What’d you tell Bill?”
“Just that you and Dave had a fight, that you were upset and needed someone to talk to. I told him not to wait up for me, that I might stay over. Of course, he was practically asleep on the couch before I left so that’s where he’ll probably be in the morning. He’s such a bore lately. Where’d Dave go?”
“He didn’t go anywhere. Come on. I’ll show you. “
“Oh god! Is he dead?”
“Yeah, he’s dead. But I warned him. I told him what would happen if he ever cheated on me. He asked for it. You know, he didn’t even lie about it. Said she made him feel like a real man. Well, she won’t be making him feel anything ever again, I can tell you that.”
“Did he tell you who she is? I mean, do you know who he was seeing?”
“I didn’t even ask. Right now though, we got to get rid of him. I saw a couple gators when I jogged over Possum Creek yesterday. We can dump him there. It’ll be days before they find him, if they ever do. Wrap the shower curtain around him. I’ve got the truck backed up to the deck. We can just slide him right in.”
“What are you going to tell everyone? Sooner or later someone will come looking for him.”
“Yeah, all his buddies down at Joe’s. I’ll just say we had a fight, he left and didn‘t come home. It’s almost the truth. The Johnson‘s will confirm the fight and that he left.”
“But he did come home. What about that?”
“They were asleep by then. A 747 could land in their yard and not wake them. Besides, he parked in the back when he came home. Thanks to the privacy fence Dave insisted on building, they can’t see back there. Now, let’s take out the trash.”
“God, he’s heavy. How are we going ever going to get him over the bridge?”
“I’ve got a plan. Don’t worry. Follow me in your car.”
“Alright, I’ll meet you there.”
“Don’t wimp out on me. I need you. You don’t want me going to jail do you?”
“Of course not. You’re my best friend. I won’t let you down.”
*
“Hold onto the shower curtain. I’ll ease the truck away and he’ll slide right out. Ready?”
“Go real slow. Oh god, oh god, oh god. He’s out.”
“Now to get him over the bridge. Here gator, gator. Time for a midnight snack. Grab his feet, pull him up and over the rail. Leave the shower curtain, I’ll get rid of that later. There’s a construction site not far from here. They won’t notice it in the dumpster. Good, now help me shove him over.”
“I’m going to have nightmares for weeks.”
“No, you won’t. I mean, you only helped a friend. It’s not like it’s your fault. Oh wait, it is partly your fault.”
“What do you mean?”
“Did you really think you’d get away with it? That I wouldn’t figure it out? You’ve been wearing that same cheap perfume since sixth grade. When Dave came home from his business trip last month, his clothes reeked of it.”
“Come on, I’m not the only person who wears Temptation.”
“True, but you were gone the same weekend. I called. Thought a girl’s night out would be fun. Bill told me about your business trip.”
“I was in meetings all weekend. Honest. It really was a business trip.”
“Maybe. I couldn’t prove it one way or the other so I started following Dave. The Blue Moon hotel on Tuesday and Thursdays at lunch. Then there was the day y’all didn’t even make it to the hotel. Last Wednesday wasn’t it? I always hated doing it in the front seat but you seemed to be enjoying it.”
“I didn’t mean to… I couldn’t help it. And he said it was over, that he was filing for divorce.”
“It doesn’t matter. You were my best friend. There’s no excuse. No matter what he said.”
“What are you going to tell Bill? He knows I went to your place. He’ll expect me back in the morning.”
“You never made it to my place. Just cause you said I called, doesn’t mean I did. Besides, once he finds out about you and Dave, he’ll be more angry than concerned.”
“Please… You don’t have to do this.”
“Yeah I do. You were a good friend but it‘s too late. Now, you’re dessert for the gators. Bye Pam.”
“I’m sor…”
“Look out below. Open up boys, this one will make you feel like a real gator.”
Saturday, August 8, 2009
Happy weekend...
This week started out on a very good note. The winner of the Reading Writer's Dynamic Dialogue Contest was announced and while I didn't win, I did get another Honorable Mention. I'm calling it a "tie for second" since she only picks one winner. The winning piece is excellent so check it out. For tips on what an editor is looking for in a piece, read the judge's opinion. You can check out the archives for back issues of their ezine, THE VERB, and read other winners and her comments.
And, check out the current contest prompt. These are fun to do and a great way to practice your craft.
In the novel writing news department, I've added almost 6k this week. Wednesday I had to be away from home and the puter all day so I only wrote four days this week but still did well. I'm excited about the way things are going. I hope others will be also.
Here's a cool link to check. On Sunday's they post the "Best of Twitter" links.
Want to track your word count? You can add a progress meter like mine to your website too. These are fairly easy to work with and it's really nice to see the words add up. You can find yours at StoryToolz.
Now, go write something!
Thursday, August 6, 2009
Coming up for air...
Seems I've been missing around here lately but today, I'm coming up for air and reporting in.As you know, or maybe you don't, I've put myself on an internet diet. Meaning,no internet until I get my "First 500" words written each day. This is working so well. It's reminded me there are more important things than reading the latest Twitter or Facebook update. And you know what, the world hasn't come to an end just because I've neglected the internet a bit.
I still read several agent and author blogs though not on as a regular basis as before but I've made my writing a priority and that's what I needed to do.
One thing I've noticed in the years I've been learning my craft is the more I write, the better I get. The more I write, the less I struggle with my inner editor. And the more I write, the easier the words flow.
I once heard that we need to write a million words of dreck before the good stuff comes along. And while I'm not sure I'd agree with a million, I do know the more I write, the more I make writing something important, the better the writing is.
One thing that helps me it to have a general idea of what I need to write for the day. I'm betting it'll help you too. So, have a couple scene ideas in mind. Maybe ponder them the night before or set aside a day to plan your writing week.
I saw a quote about writing inspiration a while back that really struck home. We can't wait around and hope for inspiration to find us. We need to be busy and working and serious about our craft. The inspiration will be there we just have to tap into it.
So, my challenge for you is to make writing a priority. Carve out a niche of time where you can write without being interrupted. Take whatever measures you need, even if you have to get up a few minutes earlier or stay up later than normal. Sure, the first couple days will be rough, but it'll be well worth it. Make an appointment with your writing instrument of choice and keep it. Don't wait to be inspired.
Now, what are you still doing here? Go write!!!
Tuesday, July 21, 2009
Changing POV...
Seems my mystery novel wants to be written in first person. It's been nagging me for a while but I'd been ignoring it. I mean, I already have a good start with it in third person. But the other night I finally gave in and seriously pondered the change.
My writing mentor, if I'd asked her, would say to write some in first person and see which way worked best. So I took her advice and gave first person a try. I figured I could do the "First 500" in first and not lose much if I didn't like it.
The only problem…I didn't have a good opening line. I wasn't happy with the third person opening either but just didn't have a clue how to fix it. However, once I made the commitment to give first a try, a really nice first line arrived.
Now I'm almost 2k into my rewrite, changing from third to first person. I'm really pleased with the way things are flowing and how much more the character comes through. I figure by the end of the day, I'll have caught up to the 4k mark on the counter to the right. Which will be very cool.
So, what's your favorite POV to write in and why?
My writing mentor, if I'd asked her, would say to write some in first person and see which way worked best. So I took her advice and gave first person a try. I figured I could do the "First 500" in first and not lose much if I didn't like it.
The only problem…I didn't have a good opening line. I wasn't happy with the third person opening either but just didn't have a clue how to fix it. However, once I made the commitment to give first a try, a really nice first line arrived.
Now I'm almost 2k into my rewrite, changing from third to first person. I'm really pleased with the way things are flowing and how much more the character comes through. I figure by the end of the day, I'll have caught up to the 4k mark on the counter to the right. Which will be very cool.
So, what's your favorite POV to write in and why?
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Great Rules of Writing
Do not put statements in the negative form.
And don't start sentences with a conjunction.
If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all.
De-accession euphemisms.
If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
Last, but not least, avoid cliches like the plague.
~William Safire, "Great Rules of Writing"
And don't start sentences with a conjunction.
If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all.
De-accession euphemisms.
If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
Last, but not least, avoid cliches like the plague.
~William Safire, "Great Rules of Writing"
Tuesday, May 26, 2009
Titles or A Rose by Any Other Name
Last week I took the plunge and queried a publisher for my romance novella. I'm still in the revision phase but they didn't demand it be complete, just to let them know if it was and include a synopsis.
Today, I received an email from the Senior Editor letting me know they had already published a work with the same title as mine and I needed to send her an alternative.
Okay...not a problem. Until I discovered my next choice was taken. Deep breath! I can come up with something appropriate. I spent some time with a thesaurus looking at alternative words and while I found a couple I liked, nothing that thrilled me or connected with the story. I made a note and might use them later.
Thankfully the plot bunnies were around and had an appropriate title that connects with the story and its theme. So, I sent it to the editor and made a note for myself.
Will see what happens now.
The question is, how attached to your title are you? Could you come up with another if needed?
And what about character names? I had to change a main character's last name in my mystery novel and still am not really happy with my choice. I keep trying out new names and hope something rings a bell. Sigh...
Today, I received an email from the Senior Editor letting me know they had already published a work with the same title as mine and I needed to send her an alternative.
Okay...not a problem. Until I discovered my next choice was taken. Deep breath! I can come up with something appropriate. I spent some time with a thesaurus looking at alternative words and while I found a couple I liked, nothing that thrilled me or connected with the story. I made a note and might use them later.
Thankfully the plot bunnies were around and had an appropriate title that connects with the story and its theme. So, I sent it to the editor and made a note for myself.
Will see what happens now.
The question is, how attached to your title are you? Could you come up with another if needed?
And what about character names? I had to change a main character's last name in my mystery novel and still am not really happy with my choice. I keep trying out new names and hope something rings a bell. Sigh...
Friday, May 22, 2009
Happy Memorial Day
Well, actually Happy Memorial Day weekend since the "real" Memorial Day isn't until the 30th of this month.
Special thanks to all those who either serve or have served in the military. Hubby and I both were in the Air Force. I spent a little over 4 years and then served at hubby's side while he finished out his 20.
Hubby will be off for three days, we'll hang out around the house, sleep late, do some yard work and later throw some burgers on the grill. Yum!
And, I'll be working on romance novel. Got to get that taken care of.
Have a great weekend y'all!
Jean
Oh...bit of trivia. A group of turtles is called a bale. Yeap, that's right.
Special thanks to all those who either serve or have served in the military. Hubby and I both were in the Air Force. I spent a little over 4 years and then served at hubby's side while he finished out his 20.
Hubby will be off for three days, we'll hang out around the house, sleep late, do some yard work and later throw some burgers on the grill. Yum!
And, I'll be working on romance novel. Got to get that taken care of.
Have a great weekend y'all!
Jean
Oh...bit of trivia. A group of turtles is called a bale. Yeap, that's right.
Monday, May 18, 2009
Shoulder Vultures
That's right, you know, shoulder vultures. They sit on your shoulder and whisper how terrible that last sentence is or how no one in the entire world could ever want to read anything you could write.
And they show up at the most inconvenient times too. Like right before deadlines, as you are about to drop that submission in the mail or hit the send button.
These varmits can be a major thorn in the flesh for most writers at one time or the other. Especially those of us just starting out or getting more rejection than acceptance letters. And I'm not really sure we ever totally vanquish them. I've talked to writers with many publications credits and they tell me the shoulder vultures still gather as they write.
So how do we deal with these varmits? Here's a few of my favorite ideas.
* Realize self-doubt is normal and things aren't near as bad as we think.
* Get a second opinion from another writer you respect.
* Take a break from your piece for a couple days. This allows you to look at it with fresh eyes.
* Be positive. Fight those negative thoughts with positive ones.
Shoulder vultures are one of the many things writers have to deal with. However, we don't have to let them win.
Friday, May 15, 2009
Writing Contests
I'm not into writing contests. Mainly because they are so subjective and you never really know what the judge is looking for.
However, I've found one contest I love. It's over at Reading Writers and I want to urge all of you to check it out and enter.
Each quarter, a new prompt is posted along with guidelines and date to enter by.
This quarter it's a "Dynamic Dialogue" prompt. How cool is that! Be sure to read all the guidelines on the site but here is a glimpse to whet your appetite.
Write a complete story—not a scene—that consists of pure dialogue. No narrative whatsoever, not even a he said or she replied. If it isn't spoken, and within quotation marks, it can't be on the page.
Now, why I like this contest...
1. No entry fee.
2. Winner gets nice stuff, a cash prize, a book and a critique of their entry.
3. I can read previous winners and see what judge is looking for, her likes and dislikes.
4. Working on the prompts help me learn my craft while having fun, trying new things and genres.
5. Prompts vary from quarter to quarter and you can twist them to whatever genre you are writing.
6. They let you know that your submission was received. (I hate not knowing.)
Now, click on over, check it out and get writing.
Oh, in the last contest, there were 318 entries. They pick one winner and several Honoarable Mentions, this time ten of them.
I managed another Honorable Mention. I call it a "tie for second."
However, I've found one contest I love. It's over at Reading Writers and I want to urge all of you to check it out and enter.
Each quarter, a new prompt is posted along with guidelines and date to enter by.
This quarter it's a "Dynamic Dialogue" prompt. How cool is that! Be sure to read all the guidelines on the site but here is a glimpse to whet your appetite.
Write a complete story—not a scene—that consists of pure dialogue. No narrative whatsoever, not even a he said or she replied. If it isn't spoken, and within quotation marks, it can't be on the page.
Now, why I like this contest...
1. No entry fee.
2. Winner gets nice stuff, a cash prize, a book and a critique of their entry.
3. I can read previous winners and see what judge is looking for, her likes and dislikes.
4. Working on the prompts help me learn my craft while having fun, trying new things and genres.
5. Prompts vary from quarter to quarter and you can twist them to whatever genre you are writing.
6. They let you know that your submission was received. (I hate not knowing.)
Now, click on over, check it out and get writing.
Oh, in the last contest, there were 318 entries. They pick one winner and several Honoarable Mentions, this time ten of them.
I managed another Honorable Mention. I call it a "tie for second."
Monday, May 11, 2009
Not-So-Wild Animals I Have Known by Jack Throp
I've always loved animal stories so when I received my copy of Not-So-Wild Animals I Have Known, it didn't take me long to get started reading.
I read stories of camels and cheetahs, wombats and zebras, Tasmanian devils and purse stealing vultures. It was easy to imagine sitting around the living room, Jack in the couch with his feet propped on the coffee table (shoes off, of course) listening to him tell about his days spent working with various zoos.
I'll be putting this one on my keeper shelf and recommend it for any animal lover. This book will make a really nice gift for kids and is the perfect stocking stuffer.
And while you're thinking animals, share your animal story and be entered to win a copy of Not-So-Wild Animals I Have Known. You can order your copy at Honey Locust Press.
Friday, May 8, 2009
Friday Five
Here's some cool links I've come across lately. Hope you enjoy them as much as I did.
First, I wish I'd found Procrastinating Writer years ago. They have some really great articles and tips for dealing with procrastination.
I especially like this ---> 30 Days to a Better Writer
A friend and I are going to team up for the next 10 weeks and get our novels written. If you're interested in joining in the fun, let me know.:-)
Next, Sketch Your Novel in an Hour. This is something I need to do this weekend. Yes, I have most of a rough outline on paper but you never can tell what this might bring to light.
And, here's a list of Ten Mistakes Writers Don't See. Once you have them pointed out though, you learn to look for them. Great article.
Lastly, just have to share.
"Writing is the hardest way of earning a living, with the possible exception of wrestling alligators." - Olin Miller
First, I wish I'd found Procrastinating Writer years ago. They have some really great articles and tips for dealing with procrastination.
I especially like this ---> 30 Days to a Better Writer
A friend and I are going to team up for the next 10 weeks and get our novels written. If you're interested in joining in the fun, let me know.:-)
Next, Sketch Your Novel in an Hour. This is something I need to do this weekend. Yes, I have most of a rough outline on paper but you never can tell what this might bring to light.
And, here's a list of Ten Mistakes Writers Don't See. Once you have them pointed out though, you learn to look for them. Great article.
Lastly, just have to share.
"Writing is the hardest way of earning a living, with the possible exception of wrestling alligators." - Olin Miller
Tuesday, May 5, 2009
Beginnings
I've often heard that we should start at the beginning but sometimes I wonder just where the heck the beginning is. And I've often heard it said that writers start in the wrong place and they need to get rid of the first chapter or two. Supposedly, it's a novice writer thing. And I kind of think so.
About a month ago, I agreed to do a critique for a very novice writer. (I had lots of help when I was getting started so believe I should return the favor.) Her novel was to be a romantic suspense. It started with the main character waking up, laying in bed with a flashback to her youth. The chapter continued with the character getting up, working out, taking a shower, brushing her teeth then going to get hair done, nails done at a spa, lunch and some shopping. It went on like this for "4" chapters with an occasional info dump added in. All in first person too. Finally in the 5th chapter,(about 60 pages in) we get two sentences of a hint to the novel's story then we go back to more of the same as before. I quit reading shortly after. All of this info just took up space on the page. It didn't serve any function.
These days, a writer just can't start like this. The reader won't wait for the "good" stuff. We have to catch the reader right away, give them a reason to read on.
There's been a lot written on great starts, by smarter, more experienced writers than myself so I'll not even go there. I will recommend Plot & Structure by James Scott Bell though. He has a GREAT chapter on the beginnings with some excellent examples.
The thing to remember about beginnings is you have to begin somewhere. If you don't begin, you won't get anywhere. So, whether you decide to begin with a back story info dump or drop your reader in the middle of an action scene - start! If you want to start with the weather or with a conversation, great. Just start!
You don't have to have a great beginning right off the bat. You can perfect your beginning later.
So, do you struggle with beginnings? What's your favorite way to begin a story?
About a month ago, I agreed to do a critique for a very novice writer. (I had lots of help when I was getting started so believe I should return the favor.) Her novel was to be a romantic suspense. It started with the main character waking up, laying in bed with a flashback to her youth. The chapter continued with the character getting up, working out, taking a shower, brushing her teeth then going to get hair done, nails done at a spa, lunch and some shopping. It went on like this for "4" chapters with an occasional info dump added in. All in first person too. Finally in the 5th chapter,(about 60 pages in) we get two sentences of a hint to the novel's story then we go back to more of the same as before. I quit reading shortly after. All of this info just took up space on the page. It didn't serve any function.
These days, a writer just can't start like this. The reader won't wait for the "good" stuff. We have to catch the reader right away, give them a reason to read on.
There's been a lot written on great starts, by smarter, more experienced writers than myself so I'll not even go there. I will recommend Plot & Structure by James Scott Bell though. He has a GREAT chapter on the beginnings with some excellent examples.
The thing to remember about beginnings is you have to begin somewhere. If you don't begin, you won't get anywhere. So, whether you decide to begin with a back story info dump or drop your reader in the middle of an action scene - start! If you want to start with the weather or with a conversation, great. Just start!
You don't have to have a great beginning right off the bat. You can perfect your beginning later.
So, do you struggle with beginnings? What's your favorite way to begin a story?
Monday, May 4, 2009
Honorable Mention or "Tie for Second"
Well, today was the big day. The winner of the latest Reading Writer prompt was to be announced.
Okay, maybe not so big but still, I'd been waiting for today for a couple weeks. I felt my piece had a good chance of winning but with contests, you never can tell just what the judge likes so I didn't hold my breath.
And while I didn't "win" I did get an Honorable Mention or as I like to call it, a "Tie for Second." There were 318 entries, 1 winner and 10 Honorable Mentions. So, all in all, not bad.
Congrats to all those who entered. It takes courage to put your work out there for judging.
Special congrats to those who "tied for second" and to the winner. His piece is very nice.
You can find the results here and the winner's story here.
There is plenty of time to enter their next prompt. You can find it here.
Okay, maybe not so big but still, I'd been waiting for today for a couple weeks. I felt my piece had a good chance of winning but with contests, you never can tell just what the judge likes so I didn't hold my breath.
And while I didn't "win" I did get an Honorable Mention or as I like to call it, a "Tie for Second." There were 318 entries, 1 winner and 10 Honorable Mentions. So, all in all, not bad.
Congrats to all those who entered. It takes courage to put your work out there for judging.
Special congrats to those who "tied for second" and to the winner. His piece is very nice.
You can find the results here and the winner's story here.
There is plenty of time to enter their next prompt. You can find it here.
Thursday, April 30, 2009
I was right...
The other day during chat at Long Ridge, I was telling a friend about the NETWO conference. She asked something to the effect of what was the one thing that stood out from the conference, the most important thing I brought home with me. So I thought for a moment, I mean, I had such a great time the whole weekend.
The one thing, the most important thing from the whole weekend is that "great will rise to the top of the slush and get the attention it deserves."
I said it here and I'll say it again. Write a great story, polish it until it shines, do your homework and research where to submit, then submit widely and often.
Also, I want to point out the importance of attending writer's conferences. These are a great place to connect with other writers and make friends. No one understands what it means to be a writer except another writer.
Conferences are a great place to meet agents and editors. Even if you have nothing ready to pitch, you can still get to know them on a bit more personal level.
Not sure where or when a conference will be? Then check out Shaw Guides. You can search by state or month. Also, google writer's conferences and your state. For example, Texas Writer's Conferences and see what pops up. I can say with a fair amount of certainty you won't regret attending. Unless you go to bed early, miss out on the kitchen raid, cards, snackage and great conversation.
The one thing, the most important thing from the whole weekend is that "great will rise to the top of the slush and get the attention it deserves."
I said it here and I'll say it again. Write a great story, polish it until it shines, do your homework and research where to submit, then submit widely and often.
Also, I want to point out the importance of attending writer's conferences. These are a great place to connect with other writers and make friends. No one understands what it means to be a writer except another writer.
Conferences are a great place to meet agents and editors. Even if you have nothing ready to pitch, you can still get to know them on a bit more personal level.
Not sure where or when a conference will be? Then check out Shaw Guides. You can search by state or month. Also, google writer's conferences and your state. For example, Texas Writer's Conferences and see what pops up. I can say with a fair amount of certainty you won't regret attending. Unless you go to bed early, miss out on the kitchen raid, cards, snackage and great conversation.
Monday, April 27, 2009
Conference Report
Home from the conference. I had such a great time too. I met some really nice writers and learned quite a bit. Today I'll share a few things from our character building workshop with Lori Wilde.
Character world view or how the character sees the world. This was really interesting and something I need to work on with my novel characters.
Start with your character's motto. It can be anything like, "better safe than sorry" or "just do it" or some such thing.
This also connects with the character's life metaphor. "Life is like a box of chocolates" or "life is what you make it" or something like "life is a roller coaster, adventure or battle."
These (motto and metaphor) are determined by events in that character's life. It takes some thought to figure these "defining moments" out so she gave us a general method to do so.
Think about your character from birth to 5 years old. What event happened that framed the world view?
Then, from ages 5-10, what event reinforced that world view?
Next, from 10-18, what event continued to entrench that viewpoint?
From 18-22, what event further supported that viewpoint?
Finally, what event in your character's recent past set that viewpoint in cement?
Here's an example.
Let's take Jim. He has a life metaphor that "Life is a dangerous thing." His character motto is "Always be on guard."
Now, why does he have these? Because when he was 4, his mother took him to the park where she was mugged and seriously injured. He was alone with her for an hour or so.
When he was 7, on the way to school, a car ran a red light and hit the car he was in, wrecking the car and the other driver died.
When he was 13, the school bus he and the football team were riding on was involved in an accident and several students were seriously injured.
Next, when he was 18, at graduation, he was crossing the stage to get his diploma when the bleachers collapsed.
Poor guy...no wonder he has the worldview he does. Now of course you want to make the things that happen fit your character, these are just off the top of my head and I'm still half asleep:-)
Another thing she discussed was misguided beliefs and how it's the author's job to challenge them. These beliefs are dis-empowering such as, "I'm a loser" or "I can't do anything right." For example, the movie Rocky. His misguided belief was that he was a loser and the whole movie challenged that view.
Now, some general stuff from the conference. We had a really nice workshop on the synopsis. Honestly, they aren't as bad as most people make them out to be. One person related them to book reports. The basic info and mostly boring. The agent doing the workshop commented that she didn't read the synopsis until after she read the pages and what she was really wanting to know was what happened next and how you wrapped up the story. She wasn't expecting to find your "voice" in the synopsis, just how the story turns out.
We also did this seriously cool "progressive" writing exercise for fun after the Friday night meet & greet. If you need a writing game for an event, let me know and I'll email you the details.
After the older folks went to bed (the conference building had attached dorms on either side, one for men, one for women, meeting room in the middle) about 7 of us raided the kitchen for ice and drinks then played cards, laughed and snacked until about midnight. It was so much fun.
Saturday was filled with workshops. I didn't pitch anything to either the Tor editor or the agent but one of the ladies I met and became friends with did and both of them want her full and the agent was talking about revisions and how soon she could get it done and career stuff. I expect an "I've got an agent" email any day now.
If you get the chance to attend any writer's conference, I encourage you to go. Even if you aren't ready to pitch, you'll learn lots, make friends and have a great time. Not only that, it's a great way to recharge your writing battery.
And, that's exactly what I'm about to go do!
Character world view or how the character sees the world. This was really interesting and something I need to work on with my novel characters.
Start with your character's motto. It can be anything like, "better safe than sorry" or "just do it" or some such thing.
This also connects with the character's life metaphor. "Life is like a box of chocolates" or "life is what you make it" or something like "life is a roller coaster, adventure or battle."
These (motto and metaphor) are determined by events in that character's life. It takes some thought to figure these "defining moments" out so she gave us a general method to do so.
Think about your character from birth to 5 years old. What event happened that framed the world view?
Then, from ages 5-10, what event reinforced that world view?
Next, from 10-18, what event continued to entrench that viewpoint?
From 18-22, what event further supported that viewpoint?
Finally, what event in your character's recent past set that viewpoint in cement?
Here's an example.
Let's take Jim. He has a life metaphor that "Life is a dangerous thing." His character motto is "Always be on guard."
Now, why does he have these? Because when he was 4, his mother took him to the park where she was mugged and seriously injured. He was alone with her for an hour or so.
When he was 7, on the way to school, a car ran a red light and hit the car he was in, wrecking the car and the other driver died.
When he was 13, the school bus he and the football team were riding on was involved in an accident and several students were seriously injured.
Next, when he was 18, at graduation, he was crossing the stage to get his diploma when the bleachers collapsed.
Poor guy...no wonder he has the worldview he does. Now of course you want to make the things that happen fit your character, these are just off the top of my head and I'm still half asleep:-)
Another thing she discussed was misguided beliefs and how it's the author's job to challenge them. These beliefs are dis-empowering such as, "I'm a loser" or "I can't do anything right." For example, the movie Rocky. His misguided belief was that he was a loser and the whole movie challenged that view.
Now, some general stuff from the conference. We had a really nice workshop on the synopsis. Honestly, they aren't as bad as most people make them out to be. One person related them to book reports. The basic info and mostly boring. The agent doing the workshop commented that she didn't read the synopsis until after she read the pages and what she was really wanting to know was what happened next and how you wrapped up the story. She wasn't expecting to find your "voice" in the synopsis, just how the story turns out.
We also did this seriously cool "progressive" writing exercise for fun after the Friday night meet & greet. If you need a writing game for an event, let me know and I'll email you the details.
After the older folks went to bed (the conference building had attached dorms on either side, one for men, one for women, meeting room in the middle) about 7 of us raided the kitchen for ice and drinks then played cards, laughed and snacked until about midnight. It was so much fun.
Saturday was filled with workshops. I didn't pitch anything to either the Tor editor or the agent but one of the ladies I met and became friends with did and both of them want her full and the agent was talking about revisions and how soon she could get it done and career stuff. I expect an "I've got an agent" email any day now.
If you get the chance to attend any writer's conference, I encourage you to go. Even if you aren't ready to pitch, you'll learn lots, make friends and have a great time. Not only that, it's a great way to recharge your writing battery.
And, that's exactly what I'm about to go do!
Tuesday, April 21, 2009
Not So Wild Animals I Have Known by Jack L. Throp
No, this isn't a mystery, thriller or suspense but more than ever before, we need to support fellow writers.
This book will be a wonderful gift for any animal lover along with great stocking stuffers for Christmas. Not only that, it's the perfect book to encourage young readers. Get a copy for your kids, grandkids and one or two for your local library.
And while you are there, share a true animal story and you'll be entered to win one of three autographed copies.
I've posted my story, Raccoon Encounter so give it a read and say hi.
Here's the LINK!
Wednesday, April 15, 2009
Sticky Notes
It's not really my fault. Honest, I didn't start out as a sticky note person but when someone gives you a box filled with sticy note pads, you have to use them. So, over the past several years I've collected a stack of sticky notes. Most of them are notes about writing, passwords, websites or phone numbers.
Today as I was getting started, I decided to go through my notes and get rid of those I don't need. Some, I have no clue what they mean now so they got pondered and put back in the stack. Some, such as hubby's old cell phone number, got tossed.
Here's some that I kept.
Romance story idea involving a zoo field trip...
Idea about a really nice guy who reads poetry at libraries during the day and kills bald guys on the night of the full moon.>br> Several ideas for blog posts about writing.
Two different lists of words to avoid such as that, was, were, just, very, and felt...
Two recipes. Peanut Butter Pie & Sock It To Me Cake, both are yummy by the way.
The Italian phrase "Tutto E Possibile" which means Anything is Possible.
Numerous writing tips such as...
Scene = Goal, Confict & Disaster
Scene = sequence of action that occurs continously in one place, time & POV. 1)What do we wnat reader to take away from the scene? 2) What will give dramatic power to scene?
The question "Does the scene balance action with visual details & dialogue?" I must have been focusing on scenes for a while:-)
Several ways to handle the revision process such as starting with the story, then plot, then dialogue.
The definition of a story: "A story consists of a sequence of action that occur when a sympathec character encounters a complicating situation the he confronts and solves."
All that to say, take notes of things you think are important. Save them for pondering later. Today, I found the reminder I needed among my notes.
"Write the first draft from the heart. Write the second from the head." C.S. Forester You can make your own sticky notes here.
Today as I was getting started, I decided to go through my notes and get rid of those I don't need. Some, I have no clue what they mean now so they got pondered and put back in the stack. Some, such as hubby's old cell phone number, got tossed.
Here's some that I kept.
Romance story idea involving a zoo field trip...
Idea about a really nice guy who reads poetry at libraries during the day and kills bald guys on the night of the full moon.>br> Several ideas for blog posts about writing.
Two different lists of words to avoid such as that, was, were, just, very, and felt...
Two recipes. Peanut Butter Pie & Sock It To Me Cake, both are yummy by the way.
The Italian phrase "Tutto E Possibile" which means Anything is Possible.
Numerous writing tips such as...
Scene = Goal, Confict & Disaster
Scene = sequence of action that occurs continously in one place, time & POV. 1)What do we wnat reader to take away from the scene? 2) What will give dramatic power to scene?
The question "Does the scene balance action with visual details & dialogue?" I must have been focusing on scenes for a while:-)
Several ways to handle the revision process such as starting with the story, then plot, then dialogue.
The definition of a story: "A story consists of a sequence of action that occur when a sympathec character encounters a complicating situation the he confronts and solves."
All that to say, take notes of things you think are important. Save them for pondering later. Today, I found the reminder I needed among my notes.
"Write the first draft from the heart. Write the second from the head." C.S. Forester You can make your own sticky notes here.
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